CREATIVITY for all:Best poem (0-500 pts) VOTING!

Let´s make best poem about your lands!
One poem = One nation, so you all have to cooperate in your nations as a group.
That´s why we create that "preparation topics". That´s the place where you can work on your poems!
You can post there your poems to 15.9.09 and after that we will vote!
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deadline:15.9.09
rank/points:
1st place:500 pts
2nd place:300 pts
3rd place:200 pts
4th place:100 pts
5th place:50 pts
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i know i suck


the first song you ever hear
the noise will stay in your ear
the sound will play everyday
a~chan's warmth in your heart
nochi's thought in your mind
kashi's cuteness is all there
1 is amazing
3 is perfect
perfume is defiantly worth it

^^^^ Is it possible to get minus points?

Burp, maybe I can(burp) do better!

Nice,ninja!

nope...

i like it ninja good job.

A-chantia presents it's poem.....

"I've been longing for a place to lay my head"
"I come from a place full of dreams"
"Too long have you faced dread"
"Little have i the means"
"Nor do i know why your country stands"
"You want to know why we do not suffer?"
"Why I have to like my land?
Why I have to defend
her?"
"Look at the mountain
I can see their rain
Look at our armies
I can hear their drum
look at our priests
I can feel their blessings
We are the strongest
We made your histories
My land loves me, and i love her"
"If what you say is true old man, then no longer delay this idea."
"You have found it weary traveler. Welcome to the land of A-chantia"

Written by Danki and hobocommando

YES! WE ROCK!

HAHA! YES WE DO! A-CHAN HIGH FIVE!

HiGH 5iVE

THIS IS OUR SONG OF EXULTANT JOY BECAUSE. WE ONLY CAME TO KICK SOME ASS. ROCK THE F**KIN HOUSE, AND KICK SOME ASS. WHAT WE GONNA DO WITH ALL THE CASH?

So... VOTING!!!

ninja x Danki+Hobocommando