ELECTRIC GAMES:Place for preparing yourself!

ELECTRIC GAMES:Place for preparing yourself!
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Work like one nation! Do your best as nation and win points in Electric Games!

ok how do we do that? first let me ask what are our strengths. what should we focus on?

CREATIVITY AND CRYING!

haha fair enough

so how do we work like one nation. i do think that is key. what are our tactics. what will be our zinger. what the hell are the electric games haha. wait nevermind haha. just read it. so we have to make a comic and a poem huh?

Yes, we can!

So about our poem...
What is the best about our land?

well thinking about what you said. creativity and crying. i think passion should be the hook. like i think a poem from a first person perspective describing the country through his eyes. not so much just telling about the country you know?

true!

hehe thanks

So what´s your idea?

well when i have thought about it *shcools been hot on my tail lately* i've consider a conversation between two people. sort of like the standard weary traveler sort of character as the main and then the wondering salesman as the informant. how bout you?

that sounds cool! i like your idea!
How will we begin?
Something like

"I came to one world
called A-chantia
and I wanted to buy some things..."

Or...
"Why I have to like my land?
Why I have to defend
her?

Why you asked me such a thing
I will have to sing
a song"

I really don´t know

i like those alot. specifically the second one. "Why i have to like my land. Why i have to defend her!"

that could work real well. i was sort of thinking like jumping into the middle of the conversation like with the preface that the traveler hasn't found a home yet and is looking for one and the merchant tells him about A-chantia. something like:

"I've been longing for a place to lay my head"
"I come from a place full of dreams"
"Too long have you faced dread"
"Little have i the means"

something like that. thats really crap and off the top of my head.

But it sounds cool!!

What about to connect that mine second one and this?

haha thanks. yeah i was thinking about that. this is suppose to be a group effort right sorry

sorry man. i've been a bit busy lately. got anything new?

"Look at the mountain
I can see there rain
Look at our armies
look at our priests
We are the strongest
We made your histories..."
I know. It´s stupid...

no i actually think thats really good.

"I've been longing for a place to lay my head"
"I come from a place full of dreams"
"Too long have you faced dread"
"Little have i the means"
"Nor do i know why your country stands"
"You want to know why we do not suffer?"
"Why I have to like my land?
Why I have to defend
her?"
"Look at the mountain
I can see their rain
Look at our armies
I can hear their drum
look at our priests
I can feel their blessings
We are the strongest
We made your histories
My land loves me, and i love her"
"If what you say is true old man, then no longer delay this idea."
"You have found it weary traveler. Welcome to the land of A-chantia"

oh that's good.

OH! That rocks! Will we leave like this? I think it´s pretty good now...

we can leave it like this. there is always room for improvement or tweaking but we're not trying to win the Pulitzer here. i think it's great too.

So, let´s post it on Electric games topic!
Post it hobocommando!

yes sir!

so now we need to make a comic?

Yes! But I will be not there till sunday...
So what will be theme of it?